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2022-10-03 1779

회원님의 영작문

I like watching movies when I have free time, but there is no difference in preference according to language.
However, I don't like English movies dubbed into Korean.
When I was a child, all English movies which were broadcasted in television were dubbed into Korean.
After dubbed, the voice tone and feeling of original actors were disappeared and I couldn't feel the atmosphere of original movies.
So, I prefer subtitles to dubbing.
I usually choose movies which are famous and evaluated as high rates and good reviews.
Sometimes, movies which were high rates and good reviews gives don't give me satisfaction, but it's the best method to lower the failure rate of movie choice.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Dr. Stella!

If you do not mind in which language a movie you watch is in, that means that you have reached a very high level of listening skills in English and you can understand the words and actions of the actors simulatneously. The funny thing about dubbed movies is the tone of voice indeed is lost as well as the original sentences may have different meanings from the original.

Anyway, your ideas on how to choose movies as well as your preference of subtitled ones will help you better in speaking in English. Thank you for this homework answer. The variation of sentences were carefully made. Moreover, your sentences show efficiency in grammar as well as fluency in your ideas. Excellent job!

See you again in class!

-T. Donna

I like watching movies when I have free time, but there is no difference in preference according to language.
>> Correct!

However, I don't like English movies dubbed into Korean.
>> Correct!

When I was a child, all English movies which were broadcasted in television were dubbed into Korean.
>> Correct!

After dubbed, the voice tone and feeling of original actors were disappeared and I couldn't feel the atmosphere of original movies.
>> After being dubbed, the voice tone and feeling of the original actors  disappear and I couldn't feel the atmosphere of the original movies.

So, I prefer subtitles to dubbing.
>> Correct!

I usually choose movies which are famous and evaluated as high rates and good reviews.
>> Correct!

Sometimes, movies which were high rates and good reviews gives don't give me satisfaction, but it's the best method to lower the failure rate of movie choice.
>> Sometimes, movies which were highly rated and have good reviews don't give me satisfaction, but it's the best method to lower the failure rate of movie choices.

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