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In my me-time, I want to read historical books that is one of my hobbies. History tells me many things about the past as well as today. Particularly, the failures of our ancestors let me know how to live in this unpredictable world. However, I¡¯d like to do something new for a change of scenery, such as calligraphy, or juggling. These are the ones that I have been thinking to try someday.

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Hey, Steve. You did perfectly! Juggling is definitely an interesting shift in routine^^ I hope for you to someday be able to try these new things you have on your bucket list. Thank you for sharing your thoughts once more. It is always much appreciated. Have a good night. ~Jane c", 


In my me-time, I want to read historical books that is one of my hobbies. 
>> CORRECT =) 

History tells me many things about the past as well as today. 
>> CORRECT =) 

Particularly, the failures of our ancestors let me know how to live in this unpredictable world. 
>> CORRECT =) 

However, I¡¯d like to do something new for a change of scenery, such as calligraphy, or juggling. 
>> CORRECT =) 

These are the ones that I have been thinking to try someday. 
>> CORRECT =) 

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