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What is the most romantic movie you know?

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2022-10-05 2973

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The most romantic movie is 'La la land'.
Actually I don't like romance moives so I don't know many movies. But I saw that movie because it was very famous.
First, I didn't expect. But that movie heated my heart.
The climax in this movie is Ryan Gosling was kissing to Emma Stone. But it was a imagination so I didn't anticipate that scene. And that scene is the most thing that we hope.
Because they eventually broke up and never mat again.
They just cheered each other's future.
That point is the diffreence than other romance movie.
I can realized that even unfulfillec love also can be beautiful.
La la land was remember lingerd in my mind.
I want to watch that movie again but I would be hurt my mind.
So I can't watch.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
I haven't watched this movie yet.  But with your recommendation, I will search and try this lovely movie.  I have heard this is also a blockbuster in Korea, but not in my country.  Thanks. ^^



~T. Maine


The most romantic movie is 'La la land'.
>> Correct. 
Actually I don't like romance moives so I don't know many movies. 
>> Actually, I don't like romance movies, so I don't know a lot of movies. 
But I saw that movie because it was very famous.
>> Correct. 
First, I didn't expect. 
>> First, I didn't expect it. 
But that movie heated my heart.
>> But the movie heated up my heart. 
The climax in this movie is Ryan Gosling was kissing to Emma Stone. 
>> For the climax of the movie, Ryan Gosling kissed Emma Stone. 
But it was a imagination so I didn't anticipate that scene. 
>> But it was an imagination, so I didn't anticipate that scene. 
And that scene is the most thing that we hope.
>> And that scene is the most anticipating part for the audience. 
Because they eventually broke up and never mat again.
>> It is because they eventually broke up and never meet again. 
They just cheered each other's future.
>> They just cheered for each other's future. 
That point is the diffreence than other romance movie.
>> That is the unique part from other romance movies. 
I can realized that even unfulfillec love also can be beautiful.
>> I can realize that even unfulfilled love can also become beautiful. 
La la land was remember lingerd in my mind.
>> La la Land became a memorable movie for me. 
I want to watch that movie again but I would be hurt my mind.
>> I want to watch that movie again, but it would hurt my mind. 
So I can't watch.
>> So I can't watch it again. 

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