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What\'s the most interesting trip you\'ve ever been on? Why?

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The most interesting trip I have ever been to is the goblin road in Jeju Island. This is because even though the goblin road is an uphill road, it climbs itself even when the car is turned off.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The most interesting trip I have ever been to is the goblin road in Jeju Island. 
>>> The most interesting trip I have ever been to is the goblin road on Jeju Island. 

This is because even though the goblin road is an uphill road, it climbs itself even when the car is turned off.
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