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Korean New Year's Day is just around corner. Actually, Many people are looking forward to the holiday. Some people go abroad, some people would like to meet their family missed. So they make reservation for taking trains. Even if they have to be in trouble because of traffic jam, they expect that it would be great time during the holiday.

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Hi, Rachel!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree with your answer, especially in Korea, wherein people usually go to their hometowns during holidays to visit their parents or relatives.
- T. Caitlyn
Korean New Year's Day is just around corner. 
>> Korean New Year's Day is just around the corner. 
Actually, Many people are looking forward to the holiday. 
>> CORRECT
Some people go abroad, some people would like to meet their family missed. So they make reservation for taking trains. 
>> Some people go abroad and some people like to meet their family that they miss so they reserve train tickets.
Even if they have to be in trouble because of traffic jam, they expect that it would be great time during the holiday.
>> Even if they have to be caught in a traffic jam, they still expect to have a great time during the holidays.
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