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Hi Jhozel

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회원님의 영작문

What kinds of people do you think are more prone to developing a gambling problem?

I have ever met people who is addicted to playing gambling in my twentys.
I met him in Newzealand and we were students who were living with money from our parents .
Someday, I knew that he didn't go to school anymore because he spent all the money at a Casino.
But he did not care goint to school.
Since then, whenever his parents sent him money, he went to right away to a Casino everymonth.
He dressed up every night to go to a Casino ( At that time, there was a Casino dress rule)
He was a just ordinary guy, even more he was a top class student in Korea as I remember.
He said whenever he won a game. he felt incomparable happiness.
He played gambling for his incomparable happiness which I could not understand.

Anyway,
See you next week ^^
I will be back with healthy backbone. hihihihi

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Eunice! ^^
Thank you for sharing your experience, I wonder how your friend is doing now. :D
Have a nice weekend ahead. Hoping for your fast recovery. ^^
-Jhozel

What kinds of people do you think are more prone to developing a gambling problem?

I have ever met people who is addicted to playing gambling in my twentys.
>> When I was in my twenties, I met persson who were addicted to gambling.
I met him in Newzealand and we were students who were living with money from our parents .
>>I met him in New Zealand, we were both students living off of our parents' money
Someday, I knew that he didn't go to school anymore because he spent all the money at a Casino.

>> One day, I find out that he didn't go to school anymore because he spent all the money at a Casino.
But he did not care goint to school.
>>But he had no interest in going to school.
Since then, whenever his parents sent him money, he went to right away to a Casino everymonth.
>>Since then, he had went to a casino every month as soon as his parents sent him money.
He dressed up every night to go to a Casino 
>>He would dress up and head to a casino every night. 
( At that time, there was a Casino dress rule)
>>There was a dress code for casinos at the time.
He was a just ordinary guy, even more he was a top class student in Korea as I remember.
>> Correct.
He said whenever he won a game. he felt incomparable happiness.
>>When he won a game, he would say. He had indescribable joy.
He played gambling for his incomparable happiness which I could not understand.
>>He gambled for his indescribable happiness, which I found incomprehensible.
Anyway,
>> Correct.
See you next week ^^
>> Correct.
I will be back with healthy backbone. hihihihi
>>Correct.
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