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I collecting various funny pucture. Because I like to collect pictures which use for chat with my friends. And my friends are collecting that too. The purpose of collecting this, we want to talk with my friend or just for fun.

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Hi, Daisy!
Wow, collecting various funny pictures will really make you happy and your friends. It is more fun to chat with those funny pictures. ^^
~Teacher Erin

I collecting various funny pucture.
>>I am collecting various funny pictures.
 Because I like to collect pictures which use for chat with my friends.
>>Because I like to use those pictures when I chat with my friends.
 And my friends are collecting that too.
>>CORRECT
 The purpose of collecting this,
>>CORRECT
 we want to talk with my friend or just for fun.
>>CORRECT
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