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I actually have birthday plan. In Korea, the government is opening a festival called Pho Pho Festival. So my friend Debbie and I are going to meet on saturday. But in saturday, in the morning, I have a 2 hour class. That class ends at about 3:20 p.m.. So Debbie is visiting at 3:30 p.m.. Then after we pack, we are going to Pho Pho Festival. We will do lots of activities there and will return at about 7 o\'clock p.m.. Finally, we\'re going to eat some chhocolate cake and make ublock (ubleck). After that, we\'re going to say goodbye, of course. But still, I can\'t wait for this saturday! Wish me luck, please!

P.S. How to make ublock :
1) Get the ingedients ; a large bowl, cornstarch, food coloring, warm water
2) Mix cornstarch with water in the big bowl.
3) Put food coloring in it.
4) Mix it untill it is a gooey mixture.
5) If you punch the mixture it will be stone-hard, but if you touch it tenderly, it will feel like liquid. Have fun!

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Hello Kristine! Thank you for your effort in describing your birthday plans as well as for giving me tips on to make ublock. I really appreciate it. I will see you in class.~ T. Lyn
I actually have birthday plan. 
>>I actually have birthday plans.
In Korea, the government is opening a festival called Pho Pho Festival. 
>>Correct. In Korea, the government will conduct a festival called "Pho Pho Festival."
So my friend Debbie and I are going to meet on saturday. 
>>So my friend, Debbie, and I will meet on Saturday.
But in saturday, in the morning, I have a 2 hour class. 
>>I will have a 2-hour class on Saturday morning.
That class ends at about 3:20 p.m.. 
>>My class will end at 3:20 P.M. 
So Debbie is visiting at 3:30 p.m.. 
>>So Debbi will visit me at 3:30 P.M.
Then after we pack, we are going to Pho Pho Festival. 
>>Correct.
We will do lots of activities there and will return at about 7 o\'clock p.m.. 
>>We will do a lot of activities there and will return home at 7 o'clock in the evening.
Finally, we\'re going to eat some chhocolate cake and make ublock (ubleck). 
>>Finally, we are going to eat some chocolate cake and make ublock.
After that, we\'re going to say goodbye, of course. 
>>We will say goodbye to each other after.
But still, I can\'t wait for this saturday!
>>I can't wait for this Saturday to come.
Wish me luck, please!
>>Correct.
P.S. How to make ublock :
>>Correct.
1) Get the ingedients ; a large bowl, cornstarch, food coloring, warm water
>>First, get the ingredients such as large bowl, cornstarch, food coloring, and warm water.
2) Mix cornstarch with water in the big bowl.
>>Correct.
3) Put food coloring in it.
>>Correct.
4) Mix it untill it is a gooey mixture.
>>Mix them until the mixture becomes gooey.
5) If you punch the mixture it will be stone-hard, but if you touch it tenderly, it will feel like liquid. 
>>If you mold or punch the mixture, it will be stone-hard, however, if you touch it tenderly, it will feel like liquid.
Have fun!
>>Correct.
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