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Usually, people speak opinion during meeting.
It gets positive response and sometimes it gets negative response.
Because each person has different perspective.
There are many perspective each opinion.
It is why exist criticism.

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Well done, JT! Your sentence construction is well put-together. Thank you for taking the time to do this homework. I have here some corrections, please study them carefully and take note of them. Again, thank you for your time and effort. Have a great day ahead!

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Usually, people speak opinion during meeting.
>> Usually, people speak about their opinions during meeting.
It gets positive response and sometimes it gets negative response.
>> It sometimes gets positive and negative responses.
Because each person has different perspective.
>> Correct.
There are many perspective each opinion.
>> Each opinions have different perspectives.
It is why exist criticism.
>> That's why criticism exists.
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