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I have np intention of criticizing the chinese.

When I visited Jeju island last year, some buildings existed with construction stopped.

The reason is the buoldings that the chinese started but stopped due to finantial difficulities or bankruptcy.

They were unpleasent look and harm the surrounding natural landscape.

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Good day Ms. Lily!
Is there a limitation for constructing a building on Jeju Island? 
I guess they have the courage to do so, because of the limitation of rules and policy.
See you in class.
Aki~
I have no intention of criticizing the Chinese.
>>> CORRECT!

When I visited Jeju island last year, some buildings existed with construction stopped.
>>> When I visited Jeju island last year, some buildings existed but the construction had stopped.

The reason is the buoldings that the chinese started but stopped due to finantial difficulities or bankruptcy.
>>> The reason is the buildings that the Chinese started but got stopped due to financial difficulties or bankruptcy.

They were unpleasent look and harm the surrounding natural landscape
>>> They were an eyesore and harm the natural landscape and its surroundings.
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