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What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling alone?

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When you travel alone, you don¡¯t need to care about your companions¡¯ preferences or interests when you decide where to go. Wherever you want to stop by, you can stop by. You can stay there as long as you want. Traveling alone gives you a lot of freedom in travel. However, you can feel more intimidated and more dangerous than when you¡¯re accompanied when you need to go through unsafe areas. When unexpected difficulties come up against you, two heads are better than one.
Above all, it could be more important whom you go with than where to go for you. Traveling with loved ones may enrich your traveling compared to traveling alone.

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Hello, Steve! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


When you travel alone, you don¡¯t need to care about your companions¡¯ preferences or interests when you decide where to go. 
>>> CORRECT!

Wherever you want to stop by, you can stop by. 
>>> CORRECT!

You can stay there as long as you want.
>>> CORRECT!

Traveling alone gives you a lot of freedom in travel. 
>>> CORRECT!

However, you can feel more intimidated and more dangerous than when you¡¯re accompanied when you need to go through unsafe areas. 
>>> CORRECT!

When unexpected difficulties come up against you, two heads are better than one.
>>> CORRECT!

Above all, it could be more important whom you go with than where to go for you. 
>>> CORRECT!

Traveling with loved ones may enrich your traveling compared to traveling alone.
>>> CORRECT!
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