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Have you ever been to a family reunion? How was it?

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Of course, I have experienced.
When my grandparents lived, my family and relatives met at my grandparent's birthday or holiday.
My grandparents passed away now, so these days we don't meet than ago.
However my family sometimes meet.

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Hi JT!
Thank you for sharing this. Please go over my corrections too.
~Kelly^^
Of course, I have experienced.
>> Of course, I have experienced it.
When my grandparents lived, my family and relatives met at my grandparent's birthday or holiday.
>> When my grandparents were alive, my family and relatives met on my grandparent's birthday or holiday.
My grandparents passed away now, so these days we don't meet than ago.
>> My grandparents passed away, so these days we don't meet anymore.
However my family sometimes meet.
>> Correct
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