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Plastic bags let environment harmful a lot. I think we should reduce the use of plastic bags. In fact, there are lots of alternate things like recycling bags, or you can bring your own backpack when you go to the supermarket.
Our life is short, but the earth's life is longer than us, even for our sons, we have to pay attention to environment.
Thank you.

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Hi Yun Su!
Thank you for writing your composition! ^^ I am surprised! 
I agree with you, we must consider the environment for the next generation. That is really a good point, keep it up!
See you at our next class debate! ^^
-T.Jhozel

Plastic bags let environment harmful a lot. 
>>Plastic bags contribute harm to the environment.
I think we should reduce the use of plastic bags. 
>>Correct!
In fact, there are lots of alternate things like recycling bags, or you can bring your own backpack when you go to the supermarket.
>> In fact, there are lots of alternatives, like recycling bags, or you can bring your own backpack when you go to the supermarket.
Our life is short, but the earth's life is longer than us, even for our sons, we have to pay attention to environment.
>>Our life is short, but the earth's lifespan is longer than ours, so we must consider the environment when making decisions for future generations.
Thank you.
>> Correct!
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