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Where do you prefer to live when you retire, in the city or in the countryside? Why?

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If I get retire, I want to live in countryside. It's because I am living city but it is very tiring and it is hard to communicate with young people than me. But if I go to countryside, I want to communicate comfortably and live slowly. Living in the city is very difficult and it doesn't fit with me.

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Good afternoon Daisy. ^_^
Thank you for writing an essay for this question. It is quite interesting that you want to live in the countryside after retirement. ^^
I want to retire in the countryside too. I think it's quite peaceful and calm out there. 
Living in the city is stressful and sometimes depressing especially if you don't have lots of money. The life in the countryside is very simple. 
I hope you're doing great. ^^
See you later. 
~Teacher Charry :)

If I get retire, I want to live in countryside. 
>> When I retire, I want to live in the countryside. 
It's because I am living city but it is very tiring and it is hard to communicate with young people than me. 
>> It's because I have been living in the city my whole life and it's very tiring. It is also hard to communicate with people younger than I am. 
But if I go to countryside, I want to communicate comfortably and live slowly. 
>> But if I go to the countryside, I want to communicate with others comfortably and live slowly.
Living in the city is very difficult and it doesn't fit with me.
>> CORRECT!
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