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A childbirth leave which belongs to a parental leave will be helpful to use holidays. It requires a postnatal care, when they give birth to their babies.They will have a bleeding, complications and uternal problems. So, they cannot make a quick comeback to an office easily until they recover from them.

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Hi there, Judy!

I agree that this leave is so beneficial. One can only avail of this when a woman gives birth. In your country, they have more days to recuperate in the hospital compared to mothers in my country. When you get the chance to give birth someday, you can use this leave.

Anyway, thank you very much for answering the hoomework question with these information. It is very detailed and presents variations of sentences, excellent job!

See you later in class!

-T. Donna~

A childbirth leave which belongs to a parental leave will be helpful to use holidays. 
>> A childbirth leave which belongs to a parental leave will be helpful to use as holidays. 

It requires a postnatal care, when they give birth to their babies.
>> Correct!

They will have a bleeding, complications and uternal problems. 
>> They will have bleeding, complications, and uterine problems. 

So, they cannot make a quick comeback to an office easily until they recover from them.
>> Correct!
Or: So, they cannot make a quick comeback to the office easily until they recover from them.
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