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To some extent, drugs and alcohol can help artists do their creative things occasionally, but they don¡¯t depend on them because addiction to those kinds of things will lead to the destruction of themselves, let alone creative activities. Drugs and alcohol will devour artists in the end, As far as I am concerned, creativity can be originated from a sound mind and a good heart. Therefore, if artists want to make more creative things, or want to be more inspired by something new, they should know the importance of keeping their mind and heart healthy and sound as farmers try to keep their lands fertile to harvest good produce from good lands.

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Hello, Steve! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


To some extent, drugs and alcohol can help artists do their creative things occasionally, but they don¡¯t depend on them because addiction to those kinds of things will lead to the destruction of themselves, let alone creative activities. 
>>> CORRECT!

Drugs and alcohol will devour artists in the end, As far as I am concerned, creativity can be originated from a sound mind and a good heart. 
>>> CORRECT!

Therefore, if artists want to make more creative things, or want to be more inspired by something new, they should know the importance of keeping their mind and heart healthy and sound as farmers try to keep their lands fertile to harvest good produce from good lands.
>>> CORRECT!
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