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Making time to do what you love can help you ease your stress, lift your mood, and expand your social circle. And if you love what you're doing, then it will turn into your passion and your work will be great, and your life will be great. ~ Teacher QUENNY..^^

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What's something you do very well?
>> What's something you do very well?(CORRECT) 
They¡¯re sleeping and eating.
>> They¡¯re sleeping and eating.(CORREC)
I sleep a lot and like delicious food.
>>  I sleep a lot and I like to eat delicious food. 
They are not difficult.
>> They are not difficult to do. 
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What's something you do very well?

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