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In your opinion, what is the best age to be? Why?

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The Best Age (poem type)

By Chistine Heather Kim

What would happen
What would happen if I'm 13
I'll be allowed to wear makeup then
And lip gloss
And eye glitter
Nah, I'm kidding.
But my face MIGHT change
A bit more prettier
And a bit more slimmer
I'll be the most oldest and respectful and responsible when I'm 13.
I wanna be 13 right now...

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Hello Heather! Thank you for the poem you made about your age. We will talk more in class. I'll see you then! ~ T. Lyn
What would happen
>>What would happen?
What would happen if I'm 13
>>What would happen if I'm 13?
I'll be allowed to wear makeup then
>>The I can do my makeup.
And lip gloss
>>I can put on my lip gloss. 
And eye glitter
>>Also, I wear my eye glitter.
Nah, I'm kidding.
>>Correct. No, I'm just joking.
But my face MIGHT change
>>But my face may change.
A bit more prettier
>>I will be a little prettier.
And a bit more slimmer
>>And a bit slimmer.
I'll be the most oldest and respectful and responsible when I'm 13.
>>When I'm 13, I will be older, more respectable, and more responsible person.
I wanna be 13 right now...
>>I want to be 13 years old right now.
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