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You like studying English, don\'t you? Explain your answer.

작성자: 전*채
2022-11-27 1732

회원님의 영작문

Yes I am. I like studying English.When I was student my favorite subject was English.
But my mark was bad and I couldn't speak any English.
So It was my dream to speak English fluently. I was yearning.
But it was just yearning thing I didn't start learn.
The reason that I start learn English is I had a goal.
I want to be best of my career and I want to get many opportunity.
I can make various chance if I got a good English skill.
That dreams give me the passion about study.
But I'm working now so I cannot focus on learning English everytime.
So I start this speaking English program and it's really match with me.
It can help make a study routine and it gives motive everyday.
I am really enjoying studying English. So I love studying English.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Eun Chae!
English is really a good language to learn.  So keep on passionate about studying and have fun with it. I will truly miss our class! ^^


~T. Maine


Yes I am. I like studying English.
>> Yes, I do.  I like studying English. 
When I was student my favorite subject was English.
>> When I was a student, my favorite student was English. 
But my mark was bad and I couldn't speak any English.
>> Correct. 
So It was my dream to speak English fluently. 
>> So it was my dream to speak English fluently. 
I was yearning.
>> Correct. 
But it was just yearning thing I didn't start learn.
>> But it was just a yearning and I didn't start learning. 
The reason that I start learn English is I had a goal.
>> The reason I start learning English is I had a goal. 
I want to be best of my career and I want to get many opportunity.
>> I want to give the best of my career and I want to get many opportunities. 
I can make various chance if I got a good English skill.
>>  I can make various chances if I got good English skills. 
That dreams give me the passion about study.
>> Those dreams give me passion in studying. 
But I'm working now so I cannot focus on learning English everytime.
>> But I'm working now so I cannot focus on learning English every day. 
So I start this speaking English program and it's really match with me.
>> So I start this speaking English program and it really matches me. 
It can help make a study routine and it gives motive everyday.
>> It can help me make a study routine and it gives me motivation every day. 
I am really enjoying studying English. So I love studying English.
>> Correct. 

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