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I often used to hear something confidential accidentally.
I don't intend to hear it, but sometimes someone's voice is so loud and I have no choice to avoid.
Someone think there is no one to eavesdrop a secret story and talk about it conveniently, but sadly I am nearby him/her.
In most cases, I act like I don't know about the fact.
However, if I could help him/her, I will say about it and offer good solutions carefully.

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Hello, Dr. Stella!

There are instances indeed when we hear thigns we are not supposed to listen to. However, this is not our fault. For example some people talk loudly over the phone and they don't midn the volume of their voice, and many many other cases. 

Your answers below are so pragmatic. Furthermore, your sentence composition was superb! This answer was short but excellently executed. Thank you for your diligence and hardwork as always!

Catch you next week!

-T. Donna~

I often used to hear something confidential accidentally.
>>  Correct!

I don't intend to hear it, but sometimes someone's voice is so loud and I have no choice to avoid.
>> I don't intend to hear it, but sometimes someone's voice is so loud and I have no choice to avoid it.

Someone think there is no one to eavesdrop a secret story and talk about it conveniently, but sadly I am nearby him/her.
>> Someone thinks there is no one to eavesdrop a secret story and talk about it conveniently, but sadly, I am nearby him/her.

In most cases, I act like I don't know about the fact.
>> Correct!

However, if I could help him/her, I will say about it and offer good solutions carefully.
>> Correct!

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