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today I am supposed to meet friends.
one person gives me clothes which can wear my baby
it's hers baby that wore young.
I gave her coffee coupon because I thanks her.

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Good day Julia^^


It's tough to have big responsibilities, but that's what makes life.
We have to be strong enough for our responsibilities.
Anyway, enjoy your day.
I'll see you!!

T. Jeny


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today I am supposed to meet friends.
>>correct
one person gives me clothes which can wear my baby
>>One person gave me clothes for my baby.
it's hers baby that wore young.
>>It was her baby's clothes.
I gave her coffee coupon because I thanks her.
>>I gave her a coffee coupon to say thank you.
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