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Who is your favorite musician, band or group? How important are they to you?

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My favorite dance group is Great Boyz. If I don't have we dem boyz, my favorite entertainer will disappear. And you can't see any more of their cool dances. And you can't see their handsome faces. So we dem boyz are very important to me.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

My favorite dance group is Great Boyz. 
>>> CORRECT!

If I don't have we dem boyz, my favorite entertainer will disappear. 
>>> CORRECT!

And you can't see any more of their cool dances. 
>>> CORRECT!

And you can't see their handsome faces. 
>>> Also, you can't see their handsome faces. 

So we dem boyz are very important to me.
>>> CORRECT!
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