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1. Do you digest a dinning well?
2. It feels like a medicinal herb.
3. A good diet is beneficial to health.
4. A Face mask is a serious side effect of wearing masks during the COVID-19 pandemic.
5. What kind of immune system do you get?

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Hello there, Elic! Thank you for taking the time to do this homework which turned out well. You were able to make five nice sentences conveying things related to our last topic. I have placed here some corrections and alternative sentences for you to review and take notes about. Please read them carefully. Once again, thank you very much and have a great day ahead!

- Teacher Raven 

1. Do you digest a dinning well?
>> Can you digest food well?
2. It feels like a medicinal herb.
>> It tastes like a medicinal herb. OR It smells like a medicinal herb.
3. A good diet is beneficial to health.
>> Correct. OR A good diet is beneficial to our health.
4. A Face mask is a serious side effect of wearing masks during the COVID-19 pandemic.
>> Face masks are serious commodities during the COVID-19 pandemic.
5. What kind of immune system do you get?
>> How strong is your immune system?
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