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영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Homework

작성자: 박*민
2022-12-14 1524

회원님의 영작문

Do you like chatting online? Why or why not?
: I like to chat online because even we are not meeting each other we can communicate in real time whenever or where ever we are.

Tell me something about your recent travel. Where did you go? Describe to me in as much detail as you can.
: During my summer vacation this year, I went to the kids pension with my family including all the family members in law. It was located in Ga-pyeong area which is in Gyeong-gi province and it took about 2 hours by driving the car. That pool villa had a lots of theme for children. Everything was well prepared for kids to play like toys, pools, sliding boards inside.

Who is the person you like traveling with? Explain your answer.
: I like to travel with my family. Because I like to show various kinds of things to my daughter. Also I can make many good memories and communicate with my family members while traveling.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Helen, 
Whenever you’re at home you can practice your English by yourself. If you’re already thinking in English, try speaking your thoughts out loud. Read out loud, too. Practice is practice, and even if you don’t have anyone to correct your mistakes, just the act of speaking out loud will help you become more confident. ~ Keep practicing and improving.  ~ Teacher QUENNY^^


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Do you like chatting online? Why or why not?
: I like to chat online because even we are not meeting each other we can communicate in real time whenever or where ever we are.
>>  I like to chat online because even though we are not meeting each other we can communicate in real time whenever or wherever we are. Most people do chat online with their friends and sometimes if you live far apart or are always busy, it makes talking or staying connected to them much easier. We can also send photos and information to share so it's faster to be updated about what happening around us. 
Tell me something about your recent travel. Where did you go? Describe to me in as much detail as you can.
: During my summer vacation this year, I went to the kids pension with my family including all the family members in law. It was located in Ga-pyeong area which is in Gyeong-gi province and it took about 2 hours by driving the car. That pool villa had a lots of theme for children. Everything was well prepared for kids to play like toys, pools, sliding boards inside.
>> During my summer vacation this year, I went to the kids' pension with my family including all the family members-in-law. It was located in Ga-pyeong area which is in Gyeonggi province and it took about 2 hours by driving the car. That pool villa had lots of themes for children. Everything was well prepared for kids to play like toys, pools, and sliding boards inside.
Who is the person you like traveling with? Explain your answer.
: I like to travel with my family. Because I like to show various kinds of things to my daughter. Also I can make many good memories and communicate with my family members while traveling.
>> I like to travel with my family because I like to show my various kinds of things to my daughter. Also, I can make many good memories and communicate with my family members while traveling. And traveling with family can be one of the most rewarding adventures you can have together. While travel enables families to form a stronger bonds, children also benefit from new experiences and adults gain a greater appreciation for what’s around them.

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Do you like chatting online? Why or why not?
: I like to chat online because even we are not meeting each other we can communicate in real time whenever or where ever we are.

Tell me something about your recent travel. Where did you go? Describe to me in as much detail as you can.
: During my summer vacation this year, I went to the kids pension with my family including all the family members in law. It was located in Ga-pyeong area which is in Gyeong-gi province and it took about 2 hours by driving the car. That pool villa had a lots of theme for children. Everything was well prepared for kids to play like toys, pools, sliding boards inside.

Who is the person you like traveling with? Explain your answer.
: I like to travel with my family. Because I like to show various kinds of things to my daughter. Also I can make many good memories and communicate with my family members while traveling.
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