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When can stress be a good thing?

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2022-12-15 1875

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Stress makes us hard but it has not the only bad things.
Some light stress make us efficiency.
When we have many tasks and works, we might get stress. But we also make a plan to finish the work.
Then we might get skills to handle the stress.
Next time we won't get stress when the same situation.
But when I encounter big stress, I couldn't deal with that problems and just getting worse.
So I have to prepare that situations alwalys.
I try to make confidence whenever and make a plan for unexpect things.
Then the stress getting light so it cannot hard to me.
And finally I can change the stress for good things like impetus.

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Thank you for your optimistic answer, Chae! ^_^ I like that you were able to relate your own experiences with the question and used them as examples to support your statements. We must certainly forgo the idea that stress is restricted to being negative~ :)
~T.Harmony <3

Stress makes us hard but it has not the only bad things.
>> Stress can make life difficult for us, but it doesn't mean that it is only limited to bad things.
Some light stress make us efficiency.
>> Even a small amount of stress can make us efficient.
When we have many tasks and works, we might get stress.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> When we have several tasks to do, we might feel stressed out.
But we also make a plan to finish the work.
>> But we still try to come up with plans in order to finish our work.
Then we might get skills to handle the stress.
>> We will then learn new skills that will help us handle our stress.
Next time we won't get stress when the same situation.
>> Next time, we won't feel stressed out when we experience the same situation.
But when I encounter big stress, I couldn't deal with that problems and just getting worse.
>> However, when I feel a large amount of stress, I struggle to deal with it and it ends up getting worse.
So I have to prepare that situations alwalys.
>> So I always have to prepare myself for situations like that.
I try to make confidence whenever and make a plan for unexpect things.
>> I try to build my confidence as much as possible, and plan for unexpected scenarios.
Then the stress getting light so it cannot hard to me.
>> After that, the stress becomes lighter and stops giving me a hard time.
And finally I can change the stress for good things like impetus.
>> Finally, I can convert stress into good things like building momentum.
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