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What can you say about hate speech, bullying, and human rights violations in cyberspace in your coun

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There weren't any way to send reader's opinion before the internet invented. It was one way communication that journalists publish their articles and readers just accept what they insist. However, it is really easy to speak out personal opinion through the internet bullitin board. People put negative comments without any guilty especially, if it guarantees anonymity, there are comments which can't read it because it is cruel, brubrutal and doesn't make sense. MZ generation are good at using digital devices and know very well to use the web browers. Especially, teenagers put a lot of negative comments in real-time because they consider it as one of the exciting games. I don't understand why people put those comments to someone who doen't know. The assembly members tried to make a law about anti bullying and hate speech, but it is strongly related with freedom of speeach which is one of the most important values in democratic country.I guess that having mature civic awareness can be s

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

There weren't any way to send reader's opinion before the internet invented. 
>> There weren't any ways to send reader's opinion before the internet was invented. 
It was one way communication that journalists publish their articles and readers just accept what they insist. 
>> It was one way of communication that journalists publish their articles, and readers just accept what they insist. 
However, it is really easy to speak out personal opinion through the internet bullitin board. 
>> However, it is really easy to speak out personal opinions through the internet bulletin board. 
People put negative comments without any guilty especially, if it guarantees anonymity, there are comments which can't read it because it is cruel, brubrutal and doesn't make sense. 
>> People put negative comments without any guilty especially, if it guarantees anonymity, there are comments which can't be read because it is cruel, brutal,  and doesn't make sense. 
MZ generation are good at using digital devices and know very well to use the web browers. 
>> MZ generation are good at using digital devices and know very well to use the web browsers. 
Especially, teenagers put a lot of negative comments in real-time because they consider it as one of the exciting games. 
>> CORRECT! 
I don't understand why people put those comments to someone who doen't know. 
>> I don't understand why people put those comments to someone who they don't know. 
The assembly members tried to make a law about anti bullying and hate speech, but it is strongly related with freedom of speeach which is one of the most important values in democratic country.
>> The assembly members tried to make a law about anti bullying and hate speech, but it is strongly related with freedom of speech which is one of the most important values in democratic country.
I guess that having mature civic awareness can be s
>> I guess that having mature civic awareness can be a solution.


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