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What is the Spirit of Christmas?

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We can guess the spirit of Christmas through the name itself. Christmas is a shortened form of Christ's mass. The main character on Christmas Day is Jesus, not Santa clause or anyone else. Christmas is an annual festival commemorating the birth of Jesus Christ, observed primarily on December 25 as a religious and cultural celebration among billions of people worldwide. On this day, people went out carousing with close people. However, we shouldn't forget the real meaning of Christmas. No matter whether you have a faith in Jesus or not, it is true God incarnate came down to sacrifice himself to atone for the sin of people, and be a close friend to them. Therefore, whenever Christmas comes around every year, I try to keep this God's grace in mind and teach it to my children so that I and my children can enjoy the blessing given to Christians through Jesus's obedience to God.

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We can guess the spirit of Christmas through the name itself. 
>>> CORRECT!

Christmas is a shortened form of Christ's mass. 
>>> CORRECT!

The main character on Christmas Day is Jesus, not Santa clause or anyone else. 
>>> CORRECT!

Christmas is an annual festival commemorating the birth of Jesus Christ, observed primarily on December 25 as a religious and cultural celebration among billions of people worldwide. 
>>> CORRECT!

On this day, people went out carousing with close people. 
>>> CORRECT!

However, we shouldn't forget the real meaning of Christmas. 
>>> CORRECT!

No matter whether you have a faith in Jesus or not, it is true God incarnate came down to sacrifice himself to atone for the sin of people, and be a close friend to them. 
>>> CORRECT!

Therefore, whenever Christmas comes around every year, I try to keep this God's grace in mind and teach it to my children so that I and my children can enjoy the blessing given to Christians through Jesus's obedience to God.
>>> CORRECT!
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