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What do you do when you cannot find a solution to a problem? Answer in a few sentences.

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I tend to cry or get annoyed when I think there¡¯s no solution to find. But, after getting out of negative feelings and being relaxed, i start to find it again.

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Hello, Judy!

As human beings, we cannot solve every problem. However, we need to stay head strong all the time. If there is no solution, maybe, it is not meant to be solved.

Thank you for your homework answer. Kindly go over my grammar suggestions.

See you!

-T. Donna~

I tend to cry or get annoyed when I think there¡¯s no solution to find. 
>>  I tend to cry or get annoyed when I think that there¡¯s no solution to be found

But, after getting out of negative feelings and being relaxed, i start to find it again.
>> Correct!
Or: But, after getting out of my negative feelings and being relaxed, I start to find it again.
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