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Homework / Writing task;
1. Tell me something about one of your business trips. When and where was your trip? Tell me in as much detail as possible.
2. Say something about how your last weekend was. What did you do? Explain in as much detail as you can.
3. Can you tell me your resolutions this year? What do you do so these will materialize?

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Hi Helen, 
 I just want to remind you about the proper use of singular and plural nouns and when to use "S" at the end of the word. Overall, I didn't notice a lot of slips. You were able to make a lot of good sentences and you were very responsive as well. Keep improving. Have a good night^^ ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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 Tell me something about one of your business trips. When and where was your trip? Tell me in as much detail as possible.
>> Tell me something about one of your business trips. When and where was your trip? Tell me in as much detail as possible.(CORRECT)
Mostly I go to Germany because our headquarter is located there. 
One of my memorable business trip was when I went to headquarter 5 years ago.
I went with my colleague who is really close to me and whom I have good relationship with. We went to Rottenburg which is well known as a Christmas village. 
We had so much fun there, took a lot of photos together and saw various kinds of Christmas decorations selling in many different shops.  We also had an opportunity to eat Schwein Haxen which is a well cooked pork feet and absolutely great taste of German beer. It was really delectable.
>> Mostly I go to Germany because our headquarter is located there.  One of my memorable business trips was when I went to the headquarter of the company 5 years ago.I went there with my colleague who is really close to me and whom I have a good relationship with. We went to Rottenburg which is well-known as a Christmas village. We had so much fun there, we took a lot of photos together and saw various kinds of Christmas decorations selling in many different shops. We also had an opportunity to eat Schwein Haxen which is a well-cooked pork foot and absolutely great taste of German beer. It was really delectable.

2. Say something about how your last weekend was. What did you do? Explain in as much detail as you can.
>> Say something about how your last weekend was. What did you do? Explain in as much detail as you can.
It was freezing cold outside this weekend so my family just stayed at home without doing any special activities. During the daytime, I played with my daughter. We played with toys, matching the puzzles pieces, drawing on the sketchbook, and some kind of roleplays.And during at night after my daughter went to bed, my husband and I watched one of the Korean movie by Netflix and drank soju with delivered barbeque.
>>  It was freezing cold outside this weekend so my family just stayed at home without doing any special activities. During the daytime, I played with my daughter. We played with toys, matching the puzzle pieces, drawing on the sketchbook, and some kind of roleplay. And during at night after my daughter went to bed, my husband and I watched one of the Korean movies on Netflix and drank soju with delivered barbeque.
 
3. Can you tell me your resolutions this year? What do you do so these will materialize?
>> Can you tell me your resolutions this year? What do you do so these will materialize?
I will definitely go on a oversea trip in the upcoming new year. 
I haven't went to oversea trip for a long time because of pandemic regulations and my personal situation. I will have to save money for several months to go somewhere nice with my family.And as my new family member who is my 20 months old daughter is born, I need to save more money than before.
>> I will definitely go on an oversea trip in the upcoming new year. 
I haven't gone on an oversea trip for a long time because of pandemic regulations and my personal situation. I need to save money for several months to travel somewhere nice with my family.
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 Tell me something about one of your business trips. When and where was your trip? Tell me in as much detail as possible.
Mostly I go to Germany because our headquarter is located there. 
One of my memorable business trip was when I went to headquarter 5 years ago.
I went with my colleague who is really close to me and whom I have good relationship with. 
We went to Rottenburg which is well known as a Christmas village. 
We had so much fun there, took a lot of photos together and saw various kinds of Christmas decorations selling in many different shops. 
We also had an opportunity to eat Schwein Haxen which is a well cooked pork feet and absolutely great taste of German beer. It was really delectable.

2. Say something about how your last weekend was. What did you do? Explain in as much detail as you can.
It was freezing cold outside this weekend so my family just stayed at home without doing any special activities. 
During the daytime, I played with my daughter. We played with toys, matching the puzzles pieces, drawing on the sketchbook, and some kind of roleplays.
And during at night after my daughter went to bed, my husband and I watched one of the Korean movie by Netflix and drank soju with delivered barbeque.

3. Can you tell me your resolutions this year? What do you do so these will materialize?
I will definitely go on a oversea trip in the upcoming new year. 
I haven't went to oversea trip for a long time because of pandemic regulations and my personal situation. 
I will have to save money for several months to go somewhere nice with my family.
And as my new family member who is my 20 months old daughter is born, I need to save more money than before.
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