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What is your opinion about tattoo?

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Well, I persnoally think it's not bad to get a tattoo which is meaningful like friendship and one's love. But I don't like a full-body tattoo.

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Hello Eric! I hope you're doing ok right now. Thank you for participating actively in my class yesterday. You did well! You were able to converse with me with minimal corrections. Keep up the good work! ^^

Well, I persnoally think it's not bad to get a tattoo which is meaningful like friendship and one's love.
>> Well, I personally think that it's not bad to get a tattoo especially if the design is meaningful. For example, friendship and loved ones.
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