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Because extreme sports allow people to enjoy the thrill. People deliberately want to enjoy the thrill. That's why they watch thrilling movies, race, and visit haunted houses. Extreme sports are also done with that mindset.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Because extreme sports allow people to enjoy the thrill. 
>>> CORRECT!

People deliberately want to enjoy the thrill. 
>>> CORRECT!

That's why they watch thrilling movies, race, and visit haunted houses.
>>> CORRECT!

Extreme sports are also done with that mindset.
>>> CORRECT!
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