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Does social media improve people¡¯s communication skills? Why or why not?

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No. It's because if we only use social media, we just talk to by massenger. Then when people get some meeting with someones, most of people can't communicate with them. Because they only use messenger and they don't read the books so their literacy will get bad.

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Hi, Daisy. ^^
Thank you for finding the time to share your thoughts about this matter. 
I think to some degree, social media does help in making people feel comfortable to communicate with each other. However, that is not enough. 
People still need the face-to-face interaction because body language is still necessary. 
I hope you're warm and safe at school right now. :)
See you in our class tonight. ^^
~Teacher Charry

No. 
>> No, it doesn't. 
It's because if we only use social media, we just talk to by massenger. 
>> It's because if we only use social media, we just talk to each other through Messenger. 
Then when people get some meeting with someones, most of people can't communicate with them. 
>> Then when people get the chance to meet the person they're talking to on Messenger, most of them can't communicate well. 
Because they only use messenger and they don't read the books so their literacy will get bad.
>> It's because they only Messenger and they don't read books so their literacy deteriorates. 
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