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When I was in my university, majoring in electrical engineering, I was very interested in vessel industry. After graduation, I have been working here in my current company for 3 and halt years.
I participated in electronic propulsion project in my current job.
From this experience, I was able to know about the electric propulsion vessel equipment well about motor, battery and monitoring systems and so on.
And I was also able to build my technical skills by communicating with shipping companies and solving technical problems.
My skills and passionate personality can make me a valuable team member and help your company grow. Thank you very much.

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Good afternoon, Jun Ho! ^-^

Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.

People are more likely to overcome challenges if they are filled with passion and zeal. People who are passionate about what they do, as opposed to those who are only "in it for the money," tend to be happier and better able to solve problems.

I will see you later in class!

__T. Mayleen :)


When I was in my university, majoring in electrical engineering, I was very interested in vessel industry.
>>> When I was in college, majoring in electrical engineering, I was very interested in the vessel industry.
>>> OR: The vessel business piqued my interest when I was a college student majoring in electrical engineering.
After graduation, I have been working here in my current company for 3 and halt years.
>>> I've been with my current company for three and a half years after graduating.
I participated in electronic propulsion project in my current job.
>>> I participated in an electronic propulsion project in my current job.
From this experience, I was able to know about the electric propulsion vessel equipment well about motor, battery and monitoring systems and so on.
>>> From this experience, I was able to learn a lot about the electric propulsion vessel equipment, including the motor, battery, monitoring systems, and so on.
And I was also able to build my technical skills by communicating with shipping companies and solving technical problems.
>>> Additionally, I was able to improve my technical skills by communicating with shipping companies and solving technical problems.
>>> By interacting with shipping businesses and resolving technical issues, I was also able to advance my technical knowledge.
My skills and passionate personality can make me a valuable team member and help your company grow.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: My abilities and drive can enable me contribute significantly to your team and advance your business.
Thank you very much.
>>> CORRECT
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