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Why do people get tattoos?

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I don't know why actually, but some people think getting tattoos is looks very cool or it can shows their attitude and image. Or particular tribe maybe get tattoos for belong to. However, I think getting tattoos is not good. It's because it is hard to erase and if we get tattoos it is very hurt because ink is permeate from needle.

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Hi, Daisy! ^_^
Happy New Year! :)
Thank you for sharing your opinion regarding this matter. I think there are various reasons why people get tattoos. In my country, most people think it's a form of art. While others think it's a symbol for the tribe where you belong to. 
Anyhow, I hope you're doing great. See you in class later. ^_^
~Teacher Charry

I don't know why actually, but some people think getting tattoos is looks very cool or it can shows their attitude and image. 
>> I don't know why actually, but some people think getting tattoos looks very cool or it can show their care-free attitude and badass image.
Or particular tribe maybe get tattoos for belong to. 
>> On the other hand, particular tribes have tattoos to signify where they belong to. 
However, I think getting tattoos is not good. 
>> CORRECT!
It's because it is hard to erase and if we get tattoos it is very hurt because ink is permeate from needle.
>> It's because it is hard to erase them and if we get tattoos it is very painful because the ink is being embedded on the skin with a needle.
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