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1. Have you tried social media?
2. I can keep in touch with my friends via Facebook
3. How many do you have your followers?
4. How often do you take a public transportation?
5. Are you a popularity person?

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Good job with your last homework, Elic! For the 3rd item, you have to place the subject "followers" first before the verb "do". On the 4th item, there are many different kinds of public transportation, so you mustn't use "a" to indicate it. And lastly, on the 5th item, "popularity" is not an adjective, so you may not use it to describe a person. If you want to make an alternative sentence using "popularity", you may use it like "Popularity makes a person well-known." Other than those, you did very well with the other two items, and I am very proud of you as always! Keep up the good work and I hope to see you again next time!

- Teacher Raven 

1. Have you tried social media?
>> Correct.
2. I can keep in touch with my friends via Facebook
>> Correct. (don't forget to put "." at the end)
3. How many do you have your followers?
>> How many followers do you have?
4. How often do you take a public transportation?
>> How often do you take public transportation?
5. Are you a popularity person?
>> Are you a popular person? OR Are you popular?
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