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Opinion of being alone sometimes

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I like to being alone sometimes.
It is because No one disturb me, I am lost in thought.
I think I refresh myself when I¡¯m alone.

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Good day, Jenna. Thank you for your honesty. Continue to express yourself freely. Don't hesitate to write and speak what is in your heart. We will talk more about this topic in class. I will see you then! ~ T. Lyn
I like to being alone sometimes.
>>I like to be alone sometimes.
It is because No one disturb me, I am lost in thought.
>>I am lost in my thoughts when someone disturbs me.
I think I refresh myself when I¡¯m alone.
>>I feel like I am healed and refreshed when I am alone.
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