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Do you or would you encourage your children to watch Disney shows and movies? Why?

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I will encourage my children to watch Disney Show and movies.Because my children are young, I like to see Disney movies and dramas without watching Disney movies.And I know what's a good thing and I can see what bad.This is because you can see the expression of animation, and it's because the characteristics of the characterized.Also, I can learn their words easily.Disney show them laughter.This is because you can't discriminate racism.It's because Disney is all fun if you look at Disney.It's because they kept their feelings.a lot of education.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I will encourage my children to watch Disney Show and movies.
>>> I will encourage my children to watch Disney shows and movies.

Because my children are young, I like to see Disney movies and dramas without watching Disney movies.
>>> CORRECT!

And I know what's a good thing and I can see what bad.
>>> And I know what's a good thing and I can see what's bad.

This is because you can see the expression of animation, and it's because the characteristics of the characterized.
>>> This is because you can see the expression of animation, and it's because of the characteristics of the character.

Also, I can learn their words easily.
>>> CORRECT!

Disney show them laughter.
>>> Disney shows them laughter.

This is because you can't discriminate racism.
>>> This is because you can't discriminate against racism.

It's because Disney is all fun if you look at Disney.
>>> CORRECT!

It's because they kept their feelings.a lot of education.
>>> It's because they kept their feelings.
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