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Should brands like Victoria\'s Secret use plus-sized models?

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Yes. It's because Victoria's secret is the brand of underwear. But they only use very thin models. I think it is not fair to plus-sized models. It provides unrealistic appearance. It will never looks healthy. But plus-sized models has very common appearance with us. So if we watch the fashion show for plus-sized models, it can give positive effect.

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Good evening Daisy! ^^
Thank you for sharing your opinions regarding this matter. I loved reading them because you are so honest with it. 
I hope that you would never let clothing brands like Victoria's Secret intimidate you and make you feel that there's something wrong with your body. 
Always remember that you are perfect just the way you are. ^^
See you again in class tomorrow. :)
Good night. ^^
~Teacher Charry

Yes. 
>> Yes, they should.
It's because Victoria's secret is the brand of underwear. 
>> It's because Victoria's secret is a brand of underwear. 
But they only use very thin models. 
>> CORRECT!
I think it is not fair to plus-sized models. 
>> CORRECT!
It provides unrealistic appearance. 
>> It provides an unrealistic appearance.
It will never looks healthy. 
>> It will never look healthy. 
But plus-sized models has very common appearance with us. 
>> But plus-sized models' appearance is very similar with us. 
So if we watch the fashion show for plus-sized models, it can give positive effect.
>> So if we watch the fashion show for plus-sized models, it can give a positive effect.
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