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Should junk food be banned in schools? Why or why not?

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No, we don't have to ban to eat junk food. It's because we don't have to ban for students for their own right to eating. If we ban junk food in schools, students will feel very boring and not fun. So I don't want to ban junk food in school and teachers will feel that they want to eat junk food.

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Hi, Daisy. ^_^ 
Thank you for voicing out your opinion about junk food in schools. 
I think it's okay to eat them once in a while as long as students don't consume too much of them. 
Anyhow, I hope you're sleeping soundly right now. ^^
See you again in class tomorrow. :)
~Teacher Charry

No, we don't have to ban to eat junk food. 
>> No, we don't have to ban eating junk food in schools.
It's because we don't have to ban for students for their own right to eating. 
>> [Do you mean]: It's because we need to respect the students' right to choose the food that they will eat. 
If we ban junk food in schools, students will feel very boring and not fun. 
>> If we ban junk food in schools, students will feel very bored and feel that it's not fun being in school. 
So I don't want to ban junk food in school and teachers will feel that they want to eat junk food.
>> So I don't want to ban junk food in school and teachers will also feel that they want to eat junk food sometimes.
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