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What do you think are the key skills you will need in the future?

작성자: 황*하
2023-01-05 2574

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Technology is radically changing the way we live and work. Robotics, virtual reality and artificial intelligence are transforming careers. This era is being called the fourth industrial revolution. In the future, many jobs will be done by machines, but on the other hand, there will be plenty more jobs available for humans. Many of them will be creative and perfect for problem-solvers.
I think the key skills we need in the future is emotional intelligence, adaptability, creativity and technology skills. Those skills can't be replicated by robots. At first, Emotional intelligence refers to ability to identify and manage emotions of others. Secondly, being adaptable means that we are able to deal well with change. Adatable people can cope with things very well although it doesn't go to original plan. They are flexible enough to respond to any problems that come up. Thirdly, being creative is crucial. It means looking at things in a new way. Creativity can't be copied by AI. Lastly, techno

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Good day, Sir Hwang!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

Technology is radically changing the way we live and work. 
>> CORRECT! 
Robotics, virtual reality and artificial intelligence are transforming careers. 
>> CORRECT! 
This era is being called the fourth industrial revolution. 
>> CORRECT! 
In the future, many jobs will be done by machines, but on the other hand, there will be plenty more jobs available for humans. 
>> CORRECT! 
Many of them will be creative and perfect for problem-solvers.
>> CORRECT! 
I think the key skills we need in the future is emotional intelligence, adaptability, creativity and technology skills. 
>> CORRECT! 
Those skills can't be replicated by robots. 
>> CORRECT! 
At first, Emotional intelligence refers to ability to identify and manage emotions of others. 
>> CORRECT! 
Secondly, being adaptable means that we are able to deal well with change. 
>> CORRECT! 
Adatable people can cope with things very well although it doesn't go to original plan. 
>> Adatable people can cope with things very well although it doesn't go to the original plan. 
They are flexible enough to respond to any problems that come up. 
>> CORRECT! 
Thirdly, being creative is crucial. 
>> CORRECT! 
It means looking at things in a new way. 
>> CORRECT! 
Creativity can't be copied by AI. 
>> CORRECT! 
Lastly, techno
>> Lastly, technology should be well-manipulated by people, not the other way around.
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