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What kinds of gifts do you like to receive?

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When I receive a gift, I don't think about the price of the gift at all. Because I attach great importance to the fact that the other person has considered a gift for me. I don't get close to friends who don't consider it for me and just give expensive gifts. Because the gifts they give you are just gifts to maintain friendships. I don't have any special gifts I want to receive. I think friends who give me what I need are the best.

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Thank you for your answer, Nathan! I'm quite surprised since people usually your age would not think so maturely like you do. :) And it's a good thing. ^^ It goes to show how much you value sincerity from others around you, which in reality, is actually very important in life~
~T.Harmony <3 

When I receive a gift, I don't think about the price of the gift at all. 
>> CORRECT!
OR>> , the price of the gift doesn't cross my mind at all.
Because I attach great importance to the fact that the other person has considered a gift for me. 
>> CORRECT!
OR>> It's the thought of giving that counts.
I don't get close to friends who don't consider it for me and just give expensive gifts. 
>> I don't build close friendships with people who would rather show off with expensive gifts instead of being considerate to me.
Because the gifts they give you are just gifts to maintain friendships. 
>> CORRECT!
I don't have any special gifts I want to receive. 
>> CORRECT!
I think friends who give me what I need are the best.
>> CORRECT!
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