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Adult with job need to pay the rent

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2023-01-09 1375

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Adult with job need to pay the rent to their parents.
These days many young people get married lately.
In addition, our government give the money for people who have worked for 1year and quit it.
I don¡¯t like that policy. It can¡¯t be help the people to have patience.
So When they graduate their school.
They need to be independent or they have to pay for staying their house.

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Hello Sunny!
I would have to agree with you that adults with jobs have to pay rent to their parents to teach them responsibility. However, some adults would prefer staying or living away from their parents kid that is their condition. I don't understand young generation these days.
Thank you for doing your homework :)
Aki~

Adult with job need to pay the rent to their parents.
>>> Adults with jobs need to pay the rent to their parents.
These days many young people get married lately.
>>> CORRECT!
In addition, our government give the money for people who have worked for 1 year and quit it.
>>> In addition, our government gives money to people who have worked for 1 year and quit it.
I don¡¯t like that policy. It can¡¯t be help the people to have patience.
>>>  I don¡¯t like that policy. It can¡¯t help people to have patience.
So When they graduate their school.
>>> CORRECT!
They need to be independent or they have to pay for staying their house.
>>>  They need to be independent or they have to pay for staying at their house

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