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Do you prefer to shop alone or with other people? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each?

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I like shopping with other people. The advantage of shopping alone is that you can enjoy shopping quietly. There's no one else sticking their nose into it. The advantage of shopping with other people is that you can hear other people's opinions. It's fun to be together again.

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Hello, Stella! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I like shopping with other people. 
>>> CORRECT!

The advantage of shopping alone is that you can enjoy shopping quietly. 
>>> CORRECT!

There's no one else sticking their nose into it. 
>>> CORRECT!

The advantage of shopping with other people is that you can hear other people's opinions.
>>> CORRECT!

It's fun to be together again.
>>> CORRECT!
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