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What are the advantages of being bilingual?
There are wide ranges of choosing the career and it could be useful during our lives.
Especially when we go on a travel to another countries.

What is the best way to learn a language?
Having fun by learning is important for not to be bored.
So I think the best way to learn a language is watching to movies or videos which you can enjoy.
By watching the movies, we can also hear the native pronunciation and expressions naturally.

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Hi Helen, 
Language is a vital part of human connection and the most important part of any culture. Although all species have their ways of communicating, humans are the only ones that have mastered cognitive language communication. Language allows us to share our ideas, thoughts, and feelings with others. It is the way by which people communicate with one another, build relationships, and create a sense of community ~ Teacher QUENNY..

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What are the advantages of being bilingual?
>> What are the advantages of being bilingual?(CORRECT)
There are wide ranges of choosing the career and it could be useful during our lives.
>>There are wide ranges of choices in choosing a career and they could be useful during our lives.
Especially when we go on a travel to another countries.
>> Especially when we go on a travel to other countries.

What is the best way to learn a language?
>> What is the best way to learn a language? (CORRECT) 
Having fun by learning is important for not to be bored.
>> Having fun by learning is important for not to be bored. (CORRECT)
So I think the best way to learn a language is watching to movies or videos which you can enjoy. 
>> So I think the best way to learn a language is by watching movies or videos which you can enjoy. 
By watching the movies, we can also hear the native pronunciation and expressions naturally.
>> By watching movies, we can also hear the native pronunciation and expressions naturally.
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What are the advantages of being bilingual?
There are wide ranges of choosing the career and it could be useful during our lives.
Especially when we go on a travel to another countries.

What is the best way to learn a language?
Having fun by learning is important for not to be bored.
So I think the best way to learn a language is watching to movies or videos which you can enjoy.
By watching the movies, we can also hear the native pronunciation and expressions naturally.
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