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What is your biggest goal in life
I would say my biggest goal in life is being rich.

How do you plan to achieve that goal?
I am currently studying how to invest my money by real estate transactions or stock trading.
There are a lot of risk factors, but earning money by just working in the company takes so long time to make big money.
Also buying a lottery could be one of the effort or investigation to be rich.

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Hi Helen, 
Setting goals gives you long-term vision and short-term motivation. It focuses on your acquisition of knowledge and helps you to organize your time and your resources so that you can make the most of your life. And the most important goal in life is "HAPPINESS". ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)


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What is your biggest goal in life
>> What is your biggest goal in life?
I would say my biggest goal in life is being rich.
>> I would say my biggest goal in life is to be rich.
How do you plan to achieve that goal?
>>How do you plan to achieve that goal?(CORRECT) 
I am currently studying how to invest my money by real estate transactions or stock trading.
>> I am currently studying how to invest my money in real estate transactions or stock trading. 
There are a lot of risk factors, but earning money by just working in the company takes so long time to make big money.
>> There are a lot of risk factors, but earning money by just working in the company takes so long time to make big money.
Also buying a lottery could be one of the effort or investigation to be rich.
>> Also buying a lottery to win could be one of the options or the possibility to become rich.

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What is your biggest goal in life
I would say my biggest goal in life is being rich.

How do you plan to achieve that goal?
I am currently studying how to invest my money by real estate transactions or stock trading.
There are a lot of risk factors, but earning money by just working in the company takes so long time to make big money.
Also buying a lottery could be one of the effort or investigation to be rich.
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