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Q: From all the movies that you have seen, who was the best movie hero and the worst villain?
A: I think the best hero is doctor strange or captain America.
The two people usually do something or think based on their sane, so most of the time, they make wise decisions.
And I don't know about the worst villain because usually, I don't focus on the villains.

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Hello Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think the best hero is doctor strange or captain America.

>> I think the best hero is Doctor Strange or Captain America.
The two people usually do something or think based on their sane, so most of the time, they make wise decisions.

>> These two people usually do something or think based on their sanity, so most of the time, they make wise decisions.
And I don't know about the worst villain because usually, I don't focus on the villains.

>> I don't know about the worst villain because usually, I don't focus on the villains.

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