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Because insects look like aliens. Most people and animals have four legs (in humans, two arms and two legs). But insects have six legs. So it can be very weird to look at. Some insects even have countless legs. And they have a lot of germs. People have no choice but to avoid it instinctively.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia

Because insects look like aliens. Most people and animals have four legs (in humans, two arms and two legs). 
>>> Because insects look like aliens. Most people and animals have four legs (in humans, two arms, and two legs). 

But insects have six legs. 
>>> CORRECT!

So it can be very weird to look at. 
>>> CORRECT!

Some insects even have countless legs. 
>>> CORRECT!

And they have a lot of germs. 
>>> CORRECT!

People have no choice but to avoid it instinctively.
>>> CORRECT!
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