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You're a customer service agent and somebody called the number of your client which is supposed to be confidential information. What will you do?
If that would happen, that's a real serious problem. I would ask someone who called my client to apologize and ask how did the person knew that confidential information.

Your boss is very busy and you didn't understand his instructions clearly. How will you clarify it to him?
I really don't like this kind of situation. But if I didn't understand clearly, I cannot do anything in progress. So I am going to make a direct call and ask my boss again what was the exact instruction.

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Hi Helen, 
Thank you for always making effort to make essays and answer questions. You're doing well in constructing sentences now.  Your grammar has some improvement though you still slip with your articles and prepositions. Nevertheless, it's so nice to see your gradual improvement. Keep improving.  ~ Teacher QUENNY
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You're a customer service agent and somebody called the number of your client which is supposed to be confidential information. What will you do?
>> You're a customer service agent and somebody called the number of your client which is supposed to be confidential information. What will you do? (CORRECT) 
If that would happen, that's a real serious problem. I would ask someone who called my client to apologize and ask how did the person knew that confidential information.
>>If that would happen, that's a really serious problem. I would ask someone who called my client to apologize and ask how the person knew that confidential information.
Your boss is very busy and you didn't understand his instructions clearly. How will you clarify it to him?
>> Your boss is very busy and you didn't understand his instructions clearly. How will you clarify it to him? (CORRECT) 
I really don't like this kind of situation. But if I didn't understand clearly, I cannot do anything in progress. So I am going to make a direct call and ask my boss again what was the exact instruction. 
>> I really don't like this kind of situation. But if I didn't understand clearly, I cannot do anything in progress. So I am going to make a direct call and ask my boss again what was the exact instruction. (CORRECT) 
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You're a customer service agent and somebody called the number of your client which is supposed to be confidential information. What will you do?
If that would happen, that's a real serious problem. I would ask someone who called my client to apologize and ask how did the person knew that confidential information.

Your boss is very busy and you didn't understand his instructions clearly. How will you clarify it to him?
I really don't like this kind of situation. But if I didn't understand clearly, I cannot do anything in progress. So I am going to make a direct call and ask my boss again what was the exact instruction.
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