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Is domestic violence a big problem in your country?

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At the Previous generation, that's not a big deal, people didn't care about it. Like when you walked around the street to see a child violenced by their parents. And then you shouldn't do any act, because of their home education. But now it's been changed. A big issue that we've faced is a domestic violence. Also that comes with child abuse.

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Hello Elic, it is Wednesday already. Plan well and work efficiently so that you finish your entire assigned task by Friday. Looking forward you can enjoy your weekend. You did great today. Keep up the good work ^^

At the Previous generation, that's not a big deal, people didn't care about it.
>> Long time ago, domestic violence is not a major problem in my country. People didn't even care about it.
Like when you walked around the street to see a child violenced by their parents. And then you shouldn't do any act, because of their home education.
>> For example, when you see a kid being hit by their parents on the street you shouldn't do anything about it because that is their own way of disciplining their children.
But now it's been changed. A big issue that we've faced is a domestic violence. Also that comes with child abuse.
>> But today, everything has been changed. Domestic violence, specifically child abuse is one of biggest problem in our country.
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