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I have a kind of things that can make me happy. Like my parents, girlfriend, payroll day and etc. Especially, the one that can make me happiest is a time with other people. Nowadays, it's important to me because I don't have much time to meet with them for working, preparing an interview and getting a drink. Before I turn an adult, I didn't know that is important. But not anymore. :)

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Hello Elic, it is Wednesday already. Plan well and work efficiently so that you finish your entire assigned task by Friday. Looking forward you can enjoy your weekend. You did great today. Keep up the good work ^^

I have a kind of things that can make me happy. Like my parents, girlfriend, payroll day and etc.
>> A lot of things makes me happy such as my family, girlfriend, payroll day and etc.
Especially, the one that can make me happiest is a time with other people. 
>> Spending time with other people also makes me happy.
Nowadays, it's important to me because I don't have much time to meet with them for working, preparing an interview and getting a drink.
>> Nowadays, it's really important for me to spend time with the most important persons in my life especially that I don't get to have much time.
Before I turn an adult, I didn't know that is important. But not anymore. :)
>> When I was younger, I thought these things doesn't make me happy. But now, not anymore.
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